Friday, August 12, 2011

I started book, Is it good enough that I should continue?

You're story is SUPER good just don't let things fly by too fast. Try making the story more believeable, as if it could happen. It felt as if one moment high school was with her friends like a normal day and the next moment its like an emotional piece which I totally like about your story! Keep it going; I was absolutely interested the whole way through.

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